ha. the good news is you got it done, just right.
Three words followedby five, then three more;a Collom lune.And yours obeyed the form immaculately.
Well, you triedThe rebell will never dieDon't ask why
Very creative...fun and love that rebel!
Not bad for a rebellious ole hip chick:)
I would say,Given the evidence, these arePerfect Collom lunes.Well done - and definitely made me smile!
haha..and you didn't break the rules at all...smiles
...glad someone used the lune-loon connection ...thought about it...good on you!
one of the most amusing responses to today's prompt. well done.http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/01/04/la-lune/
Haha - great!
Sometimes writing about how we approach writing is the perfect solution! Really enjoyed these Lunes !
Perfect, just perfect (and witty)
I enjoyed the witty post, as well as the lune comments ~Well done ~
i find counting words a tad less frustrating than syllables, definitely a cute verse.
...Ironically perfect... Oh, great you... Smiles...
Rules are not made for breaking if you will adhere to the being. :-) Take The Ten Commandments as an example. :-)
Y'all are too kind. Anders you are very correct. I am finally learning.
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